Really Good Job! I like it. Rin looks cute. But I don't think he has blue hair....but other than that, it's well done. I like the lighting and everything. You mist want to rethink his hair though, that's the only thing bothering me. I know I shouldn't be speaking and all, but hey! You learn from your mistakes. And I don't like how this thing has to be so long. But yeah.. You could a bit more light to it, I guess. Are you the one in charge of the 100 word stuff, because I think it doesn't have to be that long....
I haven't given critiques in a while; I'm a bit rusty so forgive me if this seems jumbled or doesn't make a lot of sense.
Rin is SUCH a cutie-patootie in this piece! I love the peaceful emotion the detailing and coloring give off. The detailing in his hair is well-done. The lighting coming from behind Rin is just genius. The way his eye shine in the morning light is beautifully done. The comfortable and half-asleep look on his face looks genuine. The gradation in the skin tone and pillow are just gorgeous.
I feel that a bit more could've been added to the tail. Maybe some tiny details. Other than that, this piece is gorgeous. Well done.