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Good morning, Matty
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Critique by MissMusicObsession Jul 20, 2012, 3:22:41 AM
Okay, this is only my second time doing this so if it is not very good I am sorry. xD

This piece of art is very calm and relaxed and I love the shine comming from the window.
Matt looks VERY relaxed and calm but I think his body is kind of stiff and his legs should be a bit longer, but the pose is very good. :D
The way the curitans are creased make them look very realistic and again, the shine comming out behind the curtain is really nice. It has a very nice imapt to the picture.
I would say you should have made the comuter and headphone a bit more detailed and shaded, but it is also very well drawn.
So overall this piece of art is very good.
Just so you know I could NEVER draw this lol. :)
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I'm not a huge Matt fan, but I really enjoy this artwork a lot.

I enjoy the pose which is natural and relaxed and the character, background and objects all work with each other - nothing seems forced in the composition. The closed eyes and cigarette really add to the character of the artwork. (I also personally find shoes very difficult, so I'm very impressed by those too!)

The light from the window and the light from the monitor are both done really well; they provide a contrast to each other with the natural light so bright in the window against the wave-like blue artificial light that gets overpowered. Perhaps the light outside could have been made even more intense.

My areas to work on would be: the left hand appears to be larger than the right. The computer looks a bit sketchy compared the rest of the work - perhaps more work on the colouring/shading of it. I feel as if his groin area is twisted slightly too far towards us (although I may just have been looking at it for too long now!).

I really enjoy the sparkles up by Matt's face, I feel as though they're enhancing the blinding sunlight, but I'm not sure about the ones further away, such as bottom right. It doesn't seem to be adding to the environment nor an emotion. (Without it there'd more of a dark/light contrast)

I think overall the execution and composition are really lovely and I certainly find it a fascinating and relaxing piece. Just perhaps a couple of edits could give it more impact/contrasts.
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Ellya-h Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
It reminds me of an old fanart (same pose, cigarette), really awesome, relaxing...
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elconcombro Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
I didn't think it could be possible but I love matt even more now!!
This is just so awesome *o*
I really love your work!
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neko-mancer Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
I love this
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Insulinum Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Такая атмосферная работа, такая солнечная *__*
Очень нравится.
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Большое спасибо ^^
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BlackAprilBlossom Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist
Lovely! Love the light from the windows and from the computer screen.
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you)
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Neocropain Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice ! *-*
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you)
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One-Winged-Honeybee Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVE IT! :iconmattyplz:
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CoolestNinja1242 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
This is really well done
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you)
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nicely done
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^
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AlyWasHere17 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
I genuinely love everything you draw. I mean, the lighting here... *3*
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww :3
You make my day, thank you)
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Nekogami13 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Oh thats really cool! gr8 art!
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so)
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Spoiled-kitten Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
BEAUTIFUL!
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:sun:
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0Drive-by0 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist
OMG! That's AMAZING! ;O ♥
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy to hear it, thank you)
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oshawott2121 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love the lighting :)
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:sun:
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deathnotemistress Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i like how you did the light from the window and the blue light from the computer along with the small glow from the cigarette =)
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you
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hiddenlotaslee Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Student Artist
Wow... just wow! This if freaking amazing! XD
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:hug:
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Kari-Twilight-Mist Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
Ooh I love the use of light.
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm happy to hear it, thank you)
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MakowashiSakura Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
This is just...amazing, I love how all of the parts came together great! the darkness and light really work in this picture, and I just absolutely adore it. so therefore I will fave it.
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much^^
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MakowashiSakura Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
You are very welcome :D
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JUSTICEvsREALITY Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
NAAAAWWWWWWW
OH MY GOD!
THIS IS ALMOST AS AWESOME AS ACROSS THE UNIVERSE
(I am a beatles obbsessionist... i am going to be bias)
CRAP! I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS ONE
*noms*
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, dear :heart:
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lya-rt Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Professional Photographer
beautiful work !
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks)
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roxx0209 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cigarettes and curtains is a really bad combo.... lol
Don't worry Matty, you actually died by police gunfire
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
T_T
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NessaYume Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love Matty. I always have him in chucks too. Lol. Btw, I keep seeing you talking in Russian and it makes me sad. I want to learn Russian. Lol.
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahah xD
it's not worth it to learn Russian))
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NessaYume Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love a band(s) that is Russian.. I listen to their music pretty often.. I wish I knew how to get more other than DL from youtube.. But Dima.. he played in BiS and 4Post.. <3
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dima Bilan?))
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NessaYume Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Dima Bikbaev is how I know his name.. He looks like a walking, talking Mello.. Lol
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahah xD
Maybe)))
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NessaYume Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe? Lol. I watched a few of their music videos. Even his mannerisms are often how I'd imagine Mello. His voice (especially in tvoy ili nichey) is how I'd imagine it. I read that he also speaks English, is a singer/dancer/actor and has even acted in English films, though I have no idea what.. I can't really read that much about him cause most is in Russian.. =(
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Frankly, I do not really like the music that sings this group) I do not often listen to music in my native language.
But this two singers really looks like Mello^^
But I think they lacked brutality xD
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SilentAddiction23 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh man I love this so much :heart: Excuse me as I use it for my new desktop :heart: Keep up the talented work!!
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pollypwnz Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow)
I'm happy to hear it) Thank you)
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SilentAddiction23 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome :)
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