Nezumi and Sion

Beautiful, you really don't even need much of a critique for this.
The anatomy is good, and the mood was portrayed excellently. The color scheme fit the style very well, I love the way you made the light work. In fact, the lighting was what I feel made this somewhat common pose into an admirable piece of art.

The ONLY thing that could have been a bit better would maybe be the hair falling over the bottom guy's arm(sorry I don't know who's who), and maybe a little tiny bit of more contrast, but really that's only when you take a really close look at it.

Overall, it's great and certainly worthy of a fav